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A letter to myself. by ~padfoot369:iconpadfoot369:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Horror & Macabre > Fixed




Dear sweet world of dreams,
Why have you forsaken me
Bottled up my past with thee
So I'd wake up feeling empty?

Dear illusion inside my mind,
How could I have been so blind
While knowing I would never find
What it was I left behind?

Dear seventh sin of greed,
Why is it I feel the need
To think of him while I bleed
And how I never too the lead?

Dear magical fantasy,
Why can't I just be free?
You lied to me constantly
While keeping me content subliminally.

Dear feeling of hate inside,
It is you I tried to hide
I blame you for the times I've lied
It's your fault for every time I've cried.

Dear innocence, I smell red
From all those thoughts inside my head
And all the plotting I do in bed
Knowing someone will end up dead.

Dear me,
I'm sorry.
©2005-2009 ~padfoot369
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Author's Comments

This isn't that great of a poem, but I needed a 23rd deviation and this one has been stuck in my head for awhile. The first four lines are from SRP and it inspired the rest. This is generally my thoughts and asking myself why I am the way I am... what was with all the horrible things and why do I hold myself in the dark. It can use a lot of editing, but I don't care for now. It just is.

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~booaghh Jun 16, 2005, 9:23:56 AM
thats really good!

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~hades102 Jun 16, 2005, 9:24:42 AM
This is real good, i really get the emotion from it,
my favorite part is this:

Dear seventh sin of greed,
Why is it I feel the need
To think of him while I bleed
And how I never too the lead?

good job.

Im gonna look at the rest of your stuff too, please check mine out.

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mi amor de mi vida no tienes amor para mi...
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~JuanKarlos Jun 16, 2005, 9:25:31 AM
really good :)

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:skullbones: juaNKaRLoS :skullbones:
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~padfoot369 Jun 16, 2005, 9:26:45 AM
^^; Thank you very much. I do try.

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I'm lost, won't you join me?
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~padfoot369 Jun 16, 2005, 9:27:50 AM
Thanks :hug:

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I'm lost, won't you join me?
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~padfoot369 Jun 16, 2005, 9:29:05 AM
Ok. ^^ I'll be sure to do so. I have been lazy lately and not a poetry posting person... but I have a lot of poetry that will be going up here soon ^^

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I'm lost, won't you join me?
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~coldestofflames Jun 16, 2005, 9:29:57 AM
I should post my version. Just because.

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Don't mind me. I'm just an illiterate novelist. :dance:
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~hades102 Jun 16, 2005, 9:31:18 AM
wel if you like to read poems, i got them, hopefully they'll inspire someone. anyway, thanks...

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mi amor de mi vida no tienes amor para mi...
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~padfoot369 Jun 16, 2005, 9:37:13 AM
I love poetry. ^^ I am probably going to watch you so I can read it all a little later. I have to get to posting more things for now.

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I'm lost, won't you join me?
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