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I had a dream that I didn't wake up
   Stars and wishes collided head on
Making beautiful flashes of light in the sky...
It was nothing compared to my reality with you.

There were trees taller than skyscrapers
Rivers that reflected the sunlight perfectly
    Perfect...
I believe I thought of you...
                  and how it used to be.

I started to miss you
    I called out your name
It echoed like thunder through the trees
But you didn't answer...
You never do.

Then everything went dark
   It started to rain
Refreshing tears from the sky
   I wanted to cry as well/

                               {Maybe just to prove I still could}
/To prove I haven't hardened from out time apart/

The realization struck me hard
[It was like having lead weights tossed onto my stomach]
Sinking...
Slowly..
Into the darkness
I WANTED TO SCREAM, but I found no voice
     /I guess it found me useless as well/
Just like you.

So I guess you were right with all those things you told me.

Right or not [I never listened]

I let the blood fall like rain in our war..
I let us end eachother
Just an older poem I found in my notebook today. I remember hating it when I wrote it, but I kind of like it now, though it needs some work.. Then again.. I say that about most of my work. -shrug-
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Amarao's avatar
Your writing thingies are always packed full of emotions. You are good at this.